A Race Of A Losser... Poem by Randhir kaur

A Race Of A Losser...

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One more day along the world to go,
Old days r clinged to me to and fro.
Not today but there will be a day,
When crowd will call me a star in fey.
Lame scum people do win at last,
U cant change time, it is time to change ur past.
I have looked beautiful because I have friends as reward,
Success hurts, when u dont have friends to celebrate with award.

A Race Of A Losser...
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Most great people have attained their greatest success just one step beyond their greatest failure..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 21 July 2020

I find it quite analytical and insightful. You come across all kinds of people. Some genuinely working towards big goals while others might manipulate things to their advantage. Those who work sincerely and assiduously get rewarded suitably. Thanks for sharing. I quote a few lines: Old days r clinged to me.... it is time to change ur past. I have friends as reward.... Success hurts, when u dont have friends

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Randhir Kaur 09 June 2016

Ever many thanks Fabrizio Frosini for taking out your time for my simple write. Peace on earth. Namaste from India(Bharat) ...Stay connected. Regards~Randhir kaur~

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Randhir Kaur 09 June 2016

Yes Edward for your kind words...Keep reading.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 June 2016

Time and Tide waits for no one! No one can change the past; however, we can do the best today to gain a better future. Nice work.

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