Itni izzat hai humre dil mai aapke liye
Kam pardh jate hai shaabdh
Aur Jo izzat shaabdho mai bayaan ho jaye
Wo izzat ki koi izzat nahi...
Baate to sirf dikhawa hai
Fitarat toh ghar pe choar ke aate hai
Humhri toh aap mai basi hui hai
Aapko khush dekhna humri aadat ban jaye....
Aap chahe toh humhe aazma ke dekh lijiye,
Meri sari umar apko lag jaye.
Zinda reh kar toh koi gawa nai dai paye,
Shayad jaane ke baad aapko wo izzat yaad aye....
Your poem is really mesmerizing...Randhir......about the plethora of respect for your near and dear.......mutual respect is the key to our living process.......because God resides in everybody.........nice poem..
Your words really means a lot to me.. Many thank you for your appreciation. My Respect.
Dear Randhir, your poem speaks in beautiful verse the deep respect you hold for your near and dear ones who are part of your life and made it worthy.Such feeling of respect blended with gratitude reflects your pure heart.Thanks for sharing.- - - - - -10
Hi Randhir, An Exquisite Statement on Relationships. Very nice poem. When I read, Aapko khush dekhna humri aadat ban jaye...., do I find the Vedic hymn, Loka Samasta Sukhino Bhavantu.... And then, Aap chahe toh humhe aazma ke dekh lijiye, , is another selfless surrender. And finally, Meri sari umar apko lag jaye., the ultimate sacrifice in the altar of love, so that... Zinda reh kar toh koi gawa nai dai paye, Shayad jaane ke baad aapko wo izzat yaad aye.... Very well done. You have complete hold on your words. The words dance to your tunes in the poem.. Encore! ! ! 100++
Thank you so very much Sir. I am with no words. Just blessed. Greetings from India dear poet.
No errors go in Emotions, whatever may be the Language! ! Loved it! !
I tried my best to understand the Language Poet.. but it is still about the respect I dear it all in my sense to all your near and dear ones! ! always a time to thank and show gratitude for those and showing in such respect! ! thank you for these humble lines as you shared! ! ! 10++++! ! !
Hey...that's so nice to see your feedback on my Hindi verse Edward. Glad..!
Give it out and, get it back! ! Respect. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well done Randhir.Your poem speaks about your love for loved ones as well as your command over Hindi poetry. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan