Thampi KEE

Bronze Star - 2,736 Points (kerala India)

A Rain, Let It Pour To Here - Poem by Thampi KEE

Till night
I wait here
she may ring to me
she may speaks softly
I will wait for a call
Till night and
wish to hear your voice you dear
you may sing song of love
touched your heart, I
fill with love
tell me why why don't you ring
close your eyes, cry with pain
love you dear
when you knocking my door
I don't know what I feel
you might laugh
when I cry
sending your love
standing by soul
passing a year
I don't know right at night

then again
summer came
her old smiling wallet
ringing mobile
and old prayer book.....
and again you a hanging soul

summer came around
and her old blanket on the floor
I woke to the slamming of the door
then the rain came....
and we just let it pour all over to here....

sometimes i just thinking of you
i've been not feel a love of you

and i'm looking not of you
you are a soul hanging, our wall
she said will I come in this vishu dear
well you know that we want to meet
then rain come
let pour all over to here

well i never would have been there

Comments about A Rain, Let It Pour To Here by Thampi KEE

  • Valsa George (1/17/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    Like the pouring rain, your love for your sister also pours down in torrents! I can hear the throbbing of a loving brother's heart filled with so much love for a sister, far away! How you treasure all the things that once belonged to her! A poem so warm and tender! (Report) Reply

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  • Sarojini Pattayat (11/14/2012 12:11:00 PM)

    beautiful expression of passion.
    Best wishes. write more.
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  • (12/2/2011 10:13:00 PM)

    A touching poem with a deeper meaning... Love it! (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2011 10:12:00 PM)

    A touching poem... great job! (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses (7/8/2010 9:11:00 PM)

    I believe the poem speaks about something beyond daily love but may be it is about faith. sometimes we can feel the abandonance when our wish is not become real and what we want beyond reach.
    Sometimes inner believe will provoke self-submission to the highst power but sometimes our dark side will put the sincerity barrier since we expect what we want from the God for our devotion..... and it is untrue love towards faith.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 9, 2010

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