A Rainbow Fantasy Poem by lalitha iyer

A Rainbow Fantasy

Rating: 3.8


as a Child
I picked up shells
and kept in my manor
in secret holes
they were my desires
hidden from the public
and soon I forgot
and left them behind

when I grew up
and found new pearls
I neglected the shells
full of soiled soles
but, my mansion dented
and passions demented
my life filled with tides unmeant

Wednesday, March 25, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,pearls
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Chandran 04 April 2009

Great flow...great idea........

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Vipins Puthooran 15 December 2011

A well-written poem! ! G'd flow! ! !

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Raj Arumugam 03 May 2010

powerful summary of a life, indeed of many lives, lalitha

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Rakesh Bedi 28 July 2009

...... my life filled with tides unmeant.... beautiful, lalitha!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

Beautiful observation.10+++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

fantastic and good imaginary effects, that one can visualize it even....this is what I like in good poetry and you are a good and impressive poetess.. well done poetry friend 10++++

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