A Real Sentiments Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Real Sentiments

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What occupies pivotal position in individual’s life?
Is it mother, father, brothers, relatives or wife?
Does that confined to blood relation or anything else?
Why do we remain attached and all the time very tense?

I tried to analyze it critically and came out with simple explanation
Does it need corroborative study or any specific narration?
It must be evaluated in its depth with some sense of feeling
Why people prefer to sink down with breakdown or reeling?

As it is said “We are all social animal”
We greet the happiness on its arrival
We are sad and expressive at sudden demise
We act sometimes very funny and it can spring surprise

We rejoice at somebody’s kind behavior
We think it proper and consider them as savior
It altogether offers different situation when someone tabs from back
The relations are on decline and it definitely develops crack

We bear the brunt silently and fall victim
We don’t offer prayers and remember Him
He can instill sense of confidence all the way
He will lead us to safety and stay

What all you need is self confidence and will power to stay
Earnest appeal to surrender and willingness to pray
Who can stop your march When He has all the say?
You need not suffer on that account and pay

One need not necessarily be carried away by sentiments
Why at all it needs favorable or adverse comments?
There is some peculiar occasion or enjoyable moments
One should be prepared at making some good movement

Sentiments do play an important role and sustain
It doesn’t allow dignity to fall and maintain
Any untoward incident is put on hold and contained
Composure with peace of mind is all the time retained

Who will decide the truthfulness behind sentiments?
Everybody may think it as drama and vehemently lament
It needs careful placement of views with action
What else you can expect in retaliation or reaction?


Be sentimentally very strong and assertive
Be clear in approach with things so suggestive
Nothing helps us out if we are totally evasive
It is always good to remain calm and submissive

To become sentimental is good for health
No amount of persuasion can help with wealth
Who can attempt and try to steal our treasure?
It needs to be enjoyed with the pleasure

I shall stay confined with my inside voice
I have no other idea or any choice
I can’t rise in revolt or express displeasure
I will contain self and make it sure

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chand Shikari 12 July 2010

What occupies pivotal position in individual’s life? .. it is real sentiments...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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