Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 413,157 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Remarkable Thousand - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

One step forward to close on thousand
The reality looked so much sound
The happiness was never experienced or found
I think it is deep routed in the ground

I entered here as raw poet
Many advised me to keep quiet
It was not jumping ground yet
I had seen no one here or met

The poems always fascinated
The new ideas emerged and originated
There was need for it to be put forward
This was not for any gain or reward

Everybody appreciated the poems as put forward
There was no way for looking backward
It was going to pave the way for bright future
The place was going to be there for sure

It did rest all the speculations
All the fears were put out of questions
Though it had direct bearing and relation
There was no need for comparison or equation

I may not be questioned for the quality
To certain extent it may not prove the ability
Still it is worth to put across the views
The readers may judge it with their reviews

No path is that easy to sail smoothly
How best you come out of it truthfully?
There has to be an earnest try and attempt
Alignment with readers and maintain the good rapport

I find suitably amongst all
They do invite me and call
This increases the bond of friendship
How many friends do I find on the real ship?

It is salute to those who have supported
Understood me properly and not misquoted
It is their profound love and respect that matters
It strengthens the belief and doesn’t not shatter

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 13, 2010



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