M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

A Remembrance - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A tear silently left
the corner of my eye
dragged me to the window
to look at the dark night sky

I felt her love deeper than ever
the breeze brought back
the fragrance of love
desire blossomed like the winter roses

I felt her love melting on my body
and a lump rise in my throat,
I felt the desire to meet her,
I truly understood the meaning
of this desire in her remembrance.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Form: Free Verse


Comments about A Remembrance by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (11/6/2015 10:33:00 PM)


    Thoughts of the dear one are so intense that they move the poet to tears! Tears well up in our eyes when emotions swell in our hearts! A lovely poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (11/5/2015 12:20:00 PM)


    Love gives us strength and makes us sociable. We long for meeting our love so as to have a purpose in life. This desire coupled with remembrance of that love has been deftly portrayed in the poem. Thanks. A lovely quote from the poem: the breeze brought back / the fragrance of love (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/5/2015 5:39:00 AM)


    I felt her love melting on my body
    and a lump rise in my throat,
    this is the depiction of such a strong emotion, that has made the lovers weak. Heart touching poem. Loved it.10+++
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/5/2015 5:31:00 AM)


    Tear left silently too conveys many things in expressive emotion. Feeling love makes melt both mind and body. Wise, interesting and nice sharing...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015



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