Christine K. Trease

Rookie - 149 Points (June 2,1957 / Price, Utah)

A Rhyme Of Passion - Poem by Christine K. Trease

I see you and my palms begin to sweat.
My mouth grows drier with each breath I take.
My knees begin to quiver and I say the darndest things,
which my mouth can’t stop, and my heart begins to quake.
My limbs grow limp and my stomach starts to churn.
I feel faint as vision starts to fade.
I want to run far, far away, but
it’s too late to be afraid.

Too late to be afraid of love
and what now seems to be the latest fashion.
Tis’ true I know, but sadly so,
it’s nothing more than a Rhyme of Passion.


Comments about A Rhyme Of Passion by Christine K. Trease

  • (6/24/2009 11:03:00 AM)


    I love the last stanza! It boost up the theme...10+++++ (Report) Reply

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  • Brian Dorn (11/15/2006 11:30:00 AM)


    Great rhyme, Christine. There is certainly passion in your writing... and plenty to love!
    Brian
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  • (4/13/2006 8:44:00 AM)


    Beautiful and in the style of writing I particularly like, creates good images. (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2006 9:48:00 PM)


    Hi! Christine:

    Thanks for imput, I have many Haiku's thought Id post a few
    getting lots and lots of comments, my Haiku California Coast
    just past 506 hits since posting I am overwhelmed.
    Your poem takes me back when I had my first crush.
    I was shaking so much, I could not keep my feet steady on the gas
    petal, in my ole motel A Ford. thanks for the memorie
    charles garcia
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 31, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 29, 2006


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