Friday, July 26, 2019

A River Said To The Rock Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gravity as goes
I go, pushing none my flows,
To follow Nature,
Not stature, is my nature,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 July 2019

I loved this poem and the brilliant thoughts that it imparted. A clever write. To my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 July 2019

Thank you so much dear poet RM, for the appreciation. You know, it was a three line poem, then made it into five, and added Poet; s Note. Brevity is always good, but sometimes a few more words are necessary to impart some clarity.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 July 2019

A beautiful Senryu is brilliantly executed on nature and river. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 July 2019

It is so reassuring, dear KM, to read a feedback like this, many thanks.

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