Wednesday, January 14, 2009

A Running Man; Fox & Bitter Grapes Comments

Rating: 5.0

He is running or a limping walk?
How far he runs?
He is tired and stopped!
And how long he could wait?
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nimal dunuhinga
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Jerry Hughes 15 January 2009

Thank you Nimal, my brother, for these fine words put togther eloquently. Have a great 2009. Fondly, Jerry

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Alison Cassidy 15 January 2009

Your poem tells Jerry's story superbly well. Yet something tells me those bitter grapes might be just the tonic he needs. You're right. His dogged running continues. It will take more than a slippery ladder to stop him too. You are a fine story teller Nimal, as well as a talented poet. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 14 January 2009

Very compelling. You have many poetic miles to travel. Praise for your prolific pen. Warm regards, Sandra

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 14 January 2009

wow, what a nice poem.... There he's got a ladder, at last 'bitter grapes' This time not a healthy fox but Rabid one...and grapes are not sour but bitter... lovely, Loving regards, Kolitha

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