When winds become naughty and exciting
Yellow flowers of mustard are inviting.
Our senses feel some lovely new things
Man is indebted of the pleasant springs
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I can visualize the whole scene! A beautiful Punjabi girl in an open field of flowering mustard! Very romantic description! !
This breath taking portrait of a rural Punjabi virgin in the background of a scintillating landscape of the countryside when yellow mustard flowers bring with it the spirit of the season, is just awesome. Thanks. Yellow flowers of mustard are inviting. A rural Punjabi virgin is a model of grace.
What a lovely poem on springs in the yellow fields of mustard.
Beautiful virgin added beauty of your poem..romantic poem, liked very much
, sensual with lilting rhythm and rhyme; In every way a masterpiece. Your Beautiful virgin was brought to life in this enchanting poem. Thank you sir.
A conglomeration of breathtaking scenes in this beautiful poem; the breathtaking beauty of the Punjabi Virgin, the breathtaking beauty of the mustard field and the breathtaking words employed by the poet in this fantastic piece. Beautifully crafted well executed write.10