A Sacred Offering Poem by jodlizbeth dominic

A Sacred Offering

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A burnt offering performs
For the sake of what
That's a question always
Asking the people
Who tells loving anybody
What may be the answer
Yes, will do that
Occasionally.
Up to what
As far as possible
But, condition after all
Have to get a secure living
Can give without keeping
Even a piece
Or the last piece
Thinking something for self
If arise in one's mind
Any corner of thinking
That never be a sacrifice
World know, died
One man, for ever
Crucified, merciless death
Had almighty's power
Can be escaped
Can do miracles
Have excuses so many
A lot of points in favor
But never expressed
That was a need for others
That love understood
Forgetting all the things
Neglects desires
Giving up precious life
In front of his beloved mother
Before the disciples, teased
Worldly needs blocked the truth
He opened for all
The bleeding heart
Sacred, sacrificed forever
Meant for perfect love
Human beings
To be understood
What may be called
Real love
Immolate likes for beloved
Asking offer upinnocence
For the cruel
Never that can defeat one
The pure love will lighten
In the darkness
For everybody walk along
The path of sacrificing for eternity.
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- jokudengpoms march2018

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sacrifice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 November 2018

One man, for ever Crucified, merciless death Had almighty's power Can be escaped Can do miracles.....pure love, the sacrifice of Christ Jesus a call to eternity.......love life in pure love....... thanku. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Jodizbeth. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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