A Sad Feeling Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India

A Sad Feeling

Rating: 5.0
 


I am lonely and feeling very sad
All days were nice but today it is very bad
I could not see of him in my dream
I am only for him, him and him

He always used to say me hello
He will not stop me and allow
I had decided to go after him and follow
He was firm with his promises and not hollow

His silence was baffling
The rain was dazzling
Some times amusing and sometimes puzzling
In all the way I was very much willing

I was sure he may come and tightly embrace
I thought of it as gift from God with grace
I was not at all ion mad race
I was ready for any eventuality to face

Number of times I had consented
I was proud of relation and never lamented
You were too inclined and sarcastically commented
Allowed me to come near and never prevented

The sun was blazing but with no direct rays
I he had forgotten the direction and ways
Soon the blaze will be over and night may set
I have tried so much but unable to forget

The dark clouds have covered complete sky
I wanted to ask question with optional why?
The moon too didn’t come out of hiding
The emotions were taking toll and heavily riding

Only one good news could make me happy
I was feeling very much sleepy
I was on risky side of the slope
I had still good faith with high hope

I know he will respond with responsibility
He has all the strength to go for it with ability
I shall not bind him in any condition
He needs only passion and clear ignition

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 27 July 2010

I am lonely and feeling very sad All days were nice but today it is very bad I could not see of him in my dream... so sad felling....10

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Chand Shikari 27 July 2010

his is how I rated my special woman She was very much loved by me as man What did she expect from me in turn? .. dangerous state of mind....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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