Saturday, November 12, 2005

A Sad Heart Of A Lover Comments

Rating: 4.8

Beneath a huge mountain like an ant,
He watches the birds where they fly in the twilight sky towards their nests.
A single star gossips with the Moon.
And he hears their secret croon.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Anonymous Butterfly 23 April 2010

I like the lines: A single star gossips with the Moon. An he hears their secret croon. A sad imaginery. The loneliness is really heart-breaking in this piece. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 December 2009

This poem surely makes eyes wet…but the ambience will make heat leap…a perfect blend…light and shade… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sandra Fowler 02 February 2007

A poem of pure enchantment. I love to think of a star gossiping with the moon. The mood is sad, but the word picture is beautiful. Write on, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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Yonela Mali 23 October 2006

beautiful nimal, love it

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Theresa Rayman 08 March 2006

Another wonderful poem, Nimal! I love your image filled style.-TGR

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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