Beneath a huge mountain like an ant,
He watches the birds where they fly in the twilight sky towards their nests.
A single star gossips with the Moon.
And he hears their secret croon.
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This poem surely makes eyes wet…but the ambience will make heat leap…a perfect blend…light and shade… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK
A poem of pure enchantment. I love to think of a star gossiping with the moon. The mood is sad, but the word picture is beautiful. Write on, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra
Another wonderful poem, Nimal! I love your image filled style.-TGR
I like the lines: A single star gossips with the Moon. An he hears their secret croon. A sad imaginery. The loneliness is really heart-breaking in this piece. Have a nice day. B.B.