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Monday, October 22, 2012

A Secret Place

Rating: 5.0
Between life and death
There's another path
Some of us choose to live there
Away from life there's another place for broken hearts
A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves
Thoughts and regrets all meet there
The place where I open the gate to meet the present with past
Away from crowd near to the God not dead or alive
The secret place its the loneliness to meet ourselves
Away from lovers aches
But with the memories no way to disregard to escape free
The secret place there I open my hidden aches
Away from blamers glance
My bloody wounds there take a bit rest
Sossi Khachadourian
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 13 October 2017
favorite lines: Away from life there's another place for broken hearts A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves................. i think there are a few English 'errors' in the poem, but since you use four languages some days, i guess i can't expect perfection in English. Actually my English is not 'perfect' and i've used (almost) only English to speak and write and read for over 65 years! ! :) the concept of a secret place, used for a special purpose, will be appealing to many. i just bury my head in a bowl of ice cream or a box of pizza [if my mate allows it; she doesn't! : ( ]. bri :) to MyPoemList
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Ana Maria 20 January 2016
Thoughts and regrets all meet there The place where I open the gate to meet the present with past Away from crowd near to the God not dead or alive The secret place its the loneliness to meet ourselves Away from lovers aches
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Maya Be 20 January 2016
Between life and death There's another path Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves
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James Fitzpatrick 06 January 2015
I like this poem a lot, it says a lot about you, personally and in Character. You like to escape from the world you have molded around yourself, the men, the problems, the introvert in you hiding away from the extrovert. Well done you....
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Loulou Saraf 13 December 2014
Awesome emotional poem I like it fabulously chosen words
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Soul Watcher 29 October 2014
nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion
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Larra Papazian 01 November 2012
Between life and death There's anotherpath Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts A secret place!
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Larra Papazian 01 November 2012
Between life and death There's another path Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts, what an imagination great write!
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A B 23 October 2012
hey nice imagination..gud write...
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