Sossi Khachadourian

A Secret Place

Between life and death
There's another path
Some of us choose to live there
Away from life there's another place for broken hearts
A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves
Thoughts and regrets all meet there
The place where I open the gate to meet the present with past
Away from crowd near to the God not dead or alive
The secret place its the loneliness to meet ourselves
Away from lovers aches
But with the memories no way to disregard to escape free
The secret place there I open my hidden aches
Away from blamers glance
My bloody wounds there take a bit rest

Poem Submitted: Monday, October 22, 2012
Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 23, 2012

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  • Binayakumar MohantyBinayakumar Mohanty (10/30/2017 12:54:00 AM)

    Away from blamers glance
    My bloody wounds there take alittle rest.Nicely crafted poem.I loved it thanks for sharing.

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (10/13/2017 9:04:00 PM)

    favorite lines:

    Away from life there's another place for broken hearts
    A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves.................

    i think there are a few English 'errors' in the poem, but since you use four languages some days, i guess i can't expect perfection in English. Actually my English is not 'perfect' and i've used (almost) only English to speak and write and read for over 65 years! ! :)

    the concept of a secret place, used for a special purpose, will be appealing to many. i just bury my head in a bowl of ice cream or a box of pizza [if my mate allows it; she doesn't! : ( ].

    bri :)

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  • Ana MariaAna Maria (1/20/2016 9:06:00 PM)

    Thoughts and regrets all meet there
    The place where I open the gate to meet the present with past
    Away from crowd near to the God not dead or alive
    The secret place its the loneliness to meet ourselves
    Away from lovers aches

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  • Maya Be (1/20/2016 7:53:00 PM)

    Between life and death
    There's another path
    Some of us choose to live there
    Away from life there's another place for broken hearts
    A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves

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  • James Fitzpatrick (1/6/2015 9:00:00 PM)

    I like this poem a lot, it says a lot about you, personally and in Character. You like to escape from the world you have molded around yourself, the men, the problems, the introvert in you hiding away from the extrovert. Well done you....

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  • Loulou Saraf (12/13/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    Awesome emotional poem I like it fabulously chosen words

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  • Loulou Saraf (12/13/2014 7:40:00 AM)

    Away from blamers glance
    My bloody wounds there take a bit rest

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  • Loulou Saraf (12/13/2014 7:38:00 AM)

    Away from blamers glance
    My bloody wounds there take a bit rest

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  • Soul WatcherSoul Watcher (10/29/2014 8:07:00 AM)

    nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion

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  • Larra Papazian (11/1/2012 2:53:00 PM)

    Between life and death
    There's anotherpath
    Some of us choose to live there
    Away from life there's another place for broken hearts
    A secret place!

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  • Larra Papazian (11/1/2012 2:28:00 PM)

    Between life and death There's another path Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts, what an imagination great write!

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  • A B (10/23/2012 12:38:00 AM)

    hey nice imagination..gud write...

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