A Shadows Kiss Poem by Saint Cynosure

A Shadows Kiss



We two did become one today,
if only for a glance.
Our eyes they meet than danced away,
forbidden if by chance.
Within the halls of loneliness,
our shadows held each other.
Embraced for yet a single kiss,
then faded for to smother.
Tears that fell from shadows dried,
before they were to puddle.
All within a single bliss,
within a glance,
our shadows kissed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 16 October 2008

secret love kissing in the dark...hmmm very exciting maybe. thanks.md

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ppp sss 16 October 2008

There can always be so much inside a single glance. You have done a great job expressing that here, very emotive.

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Brittiany Jones 17 December 2008

wow this is realy good

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Really great piece of artwork! ........10+++ (my new- 'My naked Beauty said-')

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Ershad Mazumder 22 October 2008

Superb and excellant dear saint. I love saints sufis and dervish.

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*Trusting You* 18 October 2008

I love this one to you are amazing with words! how did you lear to write like this. *Purkey Girl*

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Sid John Gardner. 17 October 2008

Too cryptic for me Saint.Bit disjointed and the poetry did not flow as well as it may have.Theme good May have been improved by lengthening the sentences.Could have been constructed into a Sonnet, quite good thinking and theme....Just a thought.Otherwise good ideas and originality... Sid.

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