Ken Bennight

Gold Star - 4,925 Points (Dallas, Texas)

A Shadows Kiss - Poem by Ken Bennight

We two did become one today,
if only for a glance.
Our eyes they meet than danced away,
forbidden if by chance.
Within the halls of loneliness,
our shadows held each other.
Embraced for yet a single kiss,
then faded for to smother.
Tears that fell from shadows dried,
before they were to puddle.
All within a single bliss,
within a glance,
our shadows kissed.

Comments about A Shadows Kiss by Ken Bennight

  • (12/17/2008 5:09:00 PM)

    wow this is realy good (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (11/25/2008 3:50:00 AM)

    Really great piece of artwork! ........10+++

    (my new- 'My naked Beauty said-')

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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/22/2008 11:52:00 PM)

    Superb and excellant dear saint. I love saints sufis and dervish. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/18/2008 4:21:00 PM)

    I love this one to you are amazing with words! how did you lear to write like this.

    *Purkey Girl*

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  • (10/17/2008 2:43:00 PM)

    Too cryptic for me Saint.Bit disjointed and the poetry did not flow as well as it may have.Theme good May have been improved by lengthening the sentences.Could have been constructed into a Sonnet, quite good thinking and theme....Just a thought.Otherwise good ideas and originality...

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  • (10/16/2008 1:44:00 PM)

    There can always be so much inside a single glance.
    You have done a great job expressing that here, very emotive.

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  • (10/16/2008 1:27:00 PM)

    secret love kissing in the dark...hmmm very exciting maybe. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 16, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, October 17, 2008

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