Jodilee Duke

Hurt - Poem by Jodilee Duke

Now I just hurt
I feel nothing more
than incoming dirt.

Silence is building
back to the one sound l know
tink ~ tink ~ tink
into the tin can
my hope does sinks.

Unhooking the negative feed
not allowing it to seam my heart
I wont be another one of its collective pieces,
I'm a positive flow,
and because of this,
I'm alone.

Incoming dirt
covering me up
hiding me away.

Alone, now I pray.

Comments about Hurt by Jodilee Duke

  • (8/30/2008 7:04:00 PM)

    wow this one is very deep. great job (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2008 1:32:00 PM)

    Sadness can overshadow us for moments though not if the positive force in us human beings is willing to survive. Really nice poem this one is. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2008 10:52:00 AM)

    incoming dirt - lifes bull- (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2008 10:33:00 AM)

    You make me feel like you could be cutted right now and you wont bleed! I feel like this right now... Too much pain getting inside, making us getting so empty...your words really touched me! Thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2008 10:27:00 AM)

    i really like it,
    it sounds like a sad poem.
    i thinki you are a great writer

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, August 15, 2008

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