A Somber Third Poem by Edwina Reizer

A Somber Third

Rating: 5.0


A minor chord can make me sad
and yet I crave its sound.
Why that is I can't explain
for it makes me come unwound.

So what is it about that sound
that changes how I feel?
Inside my musical memories
that somber 3rd does peal.

With it come the memories
of times that made me blue,
loneliness and emptiness
and absences from you.

I know I need to free myself
and make a major leap
away from that minor chord
and away from tears that weep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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