Friday, July 1, 2011

A Somber Third Comments

Rating: 5.0

A minor chord can make me sad
and yet I crave its sound.
Why that is I can't explain
for it makes me come unwound.
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Edwina Reizer
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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