Anele TheAfrikanSon kaMthethungqongqo Potelwa

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A Soul Reedemed From Drugs - Poem by Anele TheAfrikanSon kaMthethungqongqo Potelwa

By the time it all came to humanity
It all steered in my mind
That in me
An animal had been removed
To the soul
Of such my divine heart
That neither at night nor light
I was proud to be human again

I was proud to be on my feet
My mind healed healed
With human intelligence granted
After having travelled
And walk the road
That was personalised with hardship

I stormed the tendency
Of escaping dictation
Prior my soul was a slave
It lived in the fantasy world of slavery
But I cried an extent,
Yes again I got to cr myself tears

Look at me now
I am redeemed
Because I learnt
And because I observed
I was awarded the abilty
To rule and fight
The patrimonial pain


Comments about A Soul Reedemed From Drugs by Anele TheAfrikanSon kaMthethungqongqo Potelwa

  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (7/9/2012 7:48:00 AM)


    i dont think i'm left with more words! !
    Look at me now
    I am redeemed
    Because I learnt
    And because I observed
    I was awarded the abilty
    To rule and fight
    The patrimonial pain

    when it comes to the matter of pain and fight we choose pain in disguise of fight in practical themes.........may be mind has set up to stand in strands of comfort levels of pain...we need not solve a problem coz its solution might stand again as a problem blinking us! !
    but its a poem of guts revealing the worshiping lies and a steady spirit to endure fighting successfully! !
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  • (3/11/2012 4:02:00 PM)


    i also like this and can also relate, i have overcome my demons as well. (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2011 4:44:00 AM)


    A great poem of overcoming, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 2:02:00 AM)


    Freedom the axis of a life granted by God worth the fight within for it, nice to read about the struggle up...regards (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/15/2011 3:48:00 PM)


    An excellent poem! ! ! ! Phenomenal write! ! ! !
    Plz read my poem (addiction)
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 16, 2011


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