A Sound Of Silence Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

A Sound Of Silence



From out of nowhere comes the sound of silence, filling the
air with it's solitude.

Peacefulness settles down upon a dusty mantle, settling in
for years.

There's no untoward faithfulness pacing down the corridors
to prey upon timid souls.

Only the sound of silence enters as a ghost and disappears
with the setting of the noon day sun.

Wednesday, September 24, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 24 September 2014

The last two lines are so beautiful, they're breathtakig and they provide an ideal closure for the poem. In this poem closure is very important because your subject is silence which often accompanies closure. GHOST is an inspired metaphor for silence at the poem's end. I sense a connection between that ghost's unobtrusive presence and the peacefulness that settles in without calling attention to itself. Your poem is a remarkable evocation of the Life of Things.

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