The Sun was smiling
The Stars were twinkling and staring
The Moon was laughing
Candles flamed gold
Angels praising and
aroma from heaven
Hope was hymning
Flowers swaying to the rhythm
From heaven
the vault of bliss was opened
Immortals moving mountains
and
Mortals celebrating
Rivers gushed milk and honey for heros and heroines
Tears nourished the earth
finally
Freedom lit our heart
this is very nice Abdulla..keep writing and hope u the best in ur life.
wow; this poem is so amazing, i really bet that u have a great talent i am from memel primary school, g7.mr du toit school.
Beautifully Written. U have so much emotion in your writing.. I loved it..
I like this alot. You bring out many aspects of a special day of going to heaven. You have a good grasp on this idea and vision. This is a lovely and remarkable poem. Any feedback on my poems will be appreciated as well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I understand he emotion in this poem very well. It's an intriguing poem. Leave me some feedback on a few of mine if you will. Thanks