A Stormy Haiku Story Poem by anais vionet

A Stormy Haiku Story

Rating: 4.0


thunderstorming skies...
my tongue reaches to catch the
Important raindrops

the lightning's flash
causes me to flinch in surprise
Then an after boom

A squeak of fear
static electricity
makes my hair rise up

maybe inside is a
a much better place to be
in a thunderstorm

Thursday, August 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,funny,rain,storm,teen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
daily thunderstorms sweep Georgia - I LOVE them
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael R. Burch 07 August 2020

This is another of your amusing, personable poems. You are very good in this genre. Perhaps consider: makes my hair stand up makes my hair stand on end

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Gajanan Mishra 06 August 2020

Thunderstorm - better place!

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