Saturday, October 10, 2020


Rating: 4.9
You "adults", you exasperate me
with your evasions and delays.
You're going to have to change
some of the ways that you behave.
You aren't doing your homework,
you haven't cleaned the planet,
You aren't standing up to bullies,
you haven't been sharing your things,
and you're even playing with guns.
And you're pretending everything's ok.
You were taught better than this.
Sorry, but.. You're all grounded people.
And hand over those phones!
anais vionet
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,guns,homework,teen
grounded isn't the worst - but it's close
Hans Vr 20 October 2020
I love this poem. Even though I have been an for quite some time, I have kept alive the ideals I had when I was in my teens. I thoroughly hope that more young people do keep their ideals throughout life and do not let them be swept away by " adults" who failed to live up to their own ideals
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Sandra Feldman 19 October 2020
Great Poem! You tell 'em! A lot of talk, but those that make the rules for others are the first to brake them. I totally agree with you, we certainly have no right to destroy this gorgeous, generous blue planet. And those that do should be exiled to outer space and yes, with their phones taken away. This poem certainly deserves to be, Poem of the Day! Congratulations
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Mahtab Bangalee 19 October 2020
some " adults" allegorically I think it's the some superpower countries are playing in this world with their innovative destructive weapons and for their every single misdeed suffering the third worlds. The superpower countries are pretending they are with third worlds countries but it's really very sad that all are wicked grounded!
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Mahtab Bangalee 19 October 2020
you're even playing with guns. And you're pretending everything's ok. You were taught better than this. Sorry, but.. You're all grounded people....yeah; right you are, congrats for being selected this poem as POD.....5******
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M Asim Nehal 19 October 2020
How conveniently we forget when we growup and become. Our behavior towards life, nature and other creatures becomes very indifferent. You poem is a perfect reminder of these facts. Loved the way you wrote..5***
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Belle Wassermeister 19 October 2020
Very funny, Anais, yet full of truth! Congratulations on getting member poem of the day!
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Bill Cantrell 19 October 2020
Ah, there you are now....and rightly so! We are looking forward to more of your poetry my friend!
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Hannatu Adamu 19 October 2020
Really sad state of affairs!
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Lyn Paul 19 October 2020
Your words say so much about the world right now. Wake up world. Thank you Anais.
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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 October 2020
Well done Anais. Lets read more like these
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