When my heart stops complaining
about the sudden absence of you,
and of your love and care,
I might be able to tell a story.
It'll be a long story indeed:
about how feelings germinated,
about how they got leaves,
and became beautiful green saplings.
It'll tell about how they were nurtured
with tender care and utmost love.
It'll also narrate about their joy
of dancing in the gentle breeze.
That the story will end on a stormy note
is the thing that scares me to write it.
How that gentle and cool breeze
turned into a cruel storm, I'll never fathom.
a love story with a cruel ending.. vividly highlighted by the fine contrast between joy and sadness... a well penned lyrics this 1st of yours on PH, Langa..Welcome on PH! Thanks for sharing and.. keep on writing
Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a love poem. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Write comment. Such a nice start, Langa. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks