River Poems: 485 / 500

A Stream -01

Rating: 5.0

Far off the distant hill-
Flows zigzag down and down,
Slows en route, its journey below,
Humps obstruct her, feeble flow.


Ahead with her will, strong-
Flows, singing a wild song,
Just a little, distance away-
Life's goal to find a way.


Passion builds, limbs swell,
Bubbles form, snowy, small,
Jumps into her mother's lap,
Down, below, river's splash.


Pours upon, drop by drop
Like a cricket's infant hop,
Meadows flower, bathes grass,
Meets the river, with a splash.

A Stream -01
Tuesday, September 26, 2017
River Poems: 485 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,flow,journey,meeting,river,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A small stream faces a lot many obstacles on its journey downhill before finally it meets her mother river, her destination, with a splash of emotion, near the plains below.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

Passion builds, limbs swell, Bubbles form, snowy, small, Jumps into her mother's lap, Down, below, river's splash. -A beautiful poem with nice photography! Thanks for sharing....10

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Suratha Kumar Rout 28 January 2018

Thanks for your lovely comment..

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Paresh Chakra 02 October 2017

assion builds, limbs swell, Bubbles form, snowy, small, Jumps into her mother's lap, Down, below, river's splash. Thanks for Sharing...10+++++

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Suratha Kumar Rout 28 January 2018

Thank you so much sir for your nice comment

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 November 2017

Yes I agree with you Paresh, it's a beautifully written poem.

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Biswa Ranjan Nayak 26 September 2017

Pours upon, drop by drop Like a cricket's infant hop, Meadows flower, bathes grass, Meets the river, with a splash This theme is really very beautiful. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.....10++++

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Suratha Kumar Rout 28 January 2018

Thank you sir for your comment

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Suratha Kumar Rout 28 January 2018

Thank you sir..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 November 2017

Yes I agree with you Biswa, it's a beautifully written poem.

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Rajendra Rout 26 September 2017

Wow! ! ! ! what a beautiful full poem.thanks for sharing.....10++++

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