Far off the distant hill-
Flows zigzag down and down,
Slows en route, its journey below,
Humps obstruct her, feeble flow.
...
After the rainfall
From the sky, clouds are gone.
And the Earth shining
In the golden rays of the Sun.
...
The Lily and her Moon-
One the princess of beauty
...
How strange is this world
With so many strange people
...
For a moment or two,
Its beauty and hue-
...
On A Full Moon Day
I saw
In a slot of window
The round, silvery
Face of yours.
You look
Like a princess
Of the Kingdom of the sky
Among the maids, the stars.
In the moon lit night
Each flower glitters
And the Earth looks silvery
In your shiney rays.
This is another instance of creating a beautiful poem. Keep reading and composing. Thanks for the effort.
You made your debut effort successful dear poet, starting with a very delicate topic. Your description is amazing. Keep reading in addition to composing. Thanks for the nice poem.
Your debut effort shows the hidden poetic talent in you. The path of poetry is surely a golden one. I wish you would excel in getting there, in the front bench of this zone. Of course you would require a good deal of reading great poets old, modern and classical- each one will contribute to your poetic potency. Thanks a lot Surath for this benevolent attempt.
Your contribution to the world of poetry as a teenager is immense. I wish every success in your poetic walk ahead.