A Sweet Dawn Of Desire: -02: The Waiting Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

A Sweet Dawn Of Desire: -02: The Waiting

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My eyes are blinking

and twitching,

Yes something good

to happen soon.



A peacock's song of love

that brings clouds of hope

into the desert sky of heart

burning with years of longing

and centuries of faith

for the lord of the dreams

the God of the worlds

to come down,

on the dry soil of

countless waiting and

relentless passion.




Your foot steps

Ring the bells,

My heart pounces high

It misses a beat.

My eyes are blinking

and twitching,

Yes something good

to happen soon.



(Inspired by Rini Jerry's poem" Waiting For You Darling")

Subhas,11/12/2017

A Sweet Dawn Of Desire: -02: The Waiting
Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,longing,love,love and friendship,timeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D Priyanka Singh 13 December 2017

on the dry soil of countless waiting and relentless passion. A great song of love, passion, hope and timeless friendship, so well written. 10++

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Alina Kaikeyi 12 December 2017

for the lord of the dreams the God of the worlds to come down, on the dry soil of countless waiting and relentless passion. A great song of love, passion, hope and timeless friendship, so well written. 10++++++ Alina

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Alina Kaikeyi 12 December 2017

for the lord of the dreams the God of the worlds to come down, on the dry soil of countless waiting and relentless passion. A great song of love, passion, hope and timeless friendship, so well written. 10++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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