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While you whispered
In my ears of longing
Those few secrets of love
Highly inspiring and touching...
Your words were strange,
Over the hours of your stay,
Underneath those verses of care
Roses of my last dream did lay!
Lots of pleasure and loads
Of pain we had undergone
Veiled within those moments
Engulfing my heart lovelorn!
After you spoke about her,
Never could I believe, nor did I
Dare bypassing her in my life.
Concerns of your voice,
Age old inspirations-cum-orders
Rose inside my soul to welcome
Entering of a new lovely Princess! !
Cuttack, CDA 1,
27 March 2015
Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Love the lines in the poem. Thanks for the poem and full marks to it. Sanjukta.
Thanks dear Sanjukta for your kind visit and gracious remarks.
I agree with you dear poet, its a great poem. All the lines are lovelorn.
Loved the lines Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Thank you for the sharing.
Beautiful in every aspect of a poem..it is so much fascinating Sir.
This is a great poem...so beautiful poem.............. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Beautiful poem shared.
Roses of my last dream did lay! Really it has written with deep love and friendship. Thanks for sharing
Thanks dear Prativa for the lovely remarks and these great words of encouragement.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
While you whispered In my ears of longing Those few secrets of love Highly inspiring and touching... Your words were strange, Over the hours of your stay, Underneath those verses of care Roses of my last dream did lay! Beautiful poem.10 out of 10. Thanks for sharing this poem.