A Thief In Us. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A Thief In Us.



Knock down, a game, when two sights of eyes collide,
Once knocked down, countdown takes a life time,
What message is shared, when two minds speak,
Once spoken, it takes a lifetime to understand.
What notoriety is this to have the hearts stolen,
Once stolen, let it be as it is, not to prosecute,
Everyone wants to be a thief, looking for a victim,
Victim and thief are so proud for they steal a heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 16 June 2012

the heart stolen beats in testimony in the shallow pools of those unaware.

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Wahab Abdul 16 June 2012

really a good poem, i enjoyed the concept...

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Captain Cur 15 June 2012

I use the word floored, when love knocks me down. I am an old boxer at heart, and have tasted the canvas many times. You can take the boxer out of the ring, but his hands never come down. I reread the poem, countdown takes a lifetime is a strong line, for once we are in love, our guard is always down. Do we give our heart or is it stolen? Interesting thought and great poem.

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