A Thrilling Desire Poem by vinitha nandagopal

A Thrilling Desire

Rating: 5.0


Feeling that quiver deep inside;
Shaking literally,
Excited inside out,
Heart jumping into the throat;
The emotional turbulence so intense;
Where's it going to carry me?
I can feel the gush of blood,
In every inch from tip to toe;
Brain says control it,
But the heart says enjoy it...
I face the good old dilemna,
whether to take a chance or wait...

Though i've waited long enough
I feel my soul tremble
At the thought of living into the moment..
But then i dont want to stop anything now,
Let alone my thoughts;
Which might erupt like a volcano,
Or sweep across like a cyclone...
It has to come out naturally now,
Breaking all barriers in and around...
As it had been inevitable all along..
I find myself eagerly waiting,
To savour every moment of it...
With starry eyes and a thudding heart.

kochi
09-06-2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 22 June 2010

this poetess express her soul into words and then to our inner.... Though i've waited long enough I feel my soul tremble At the thought of living into the moment.. But then i dont want to stop anything now, Let alone my thoughts; Which might erupt like a volcano,

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Sreekala Sukumaran 22 June 2010

Well written nice flow of wordings enjoyed it...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 June 2010

‘Brain says control it, /But the heart says enjoy it...’…beauty applause ‘To savor every moment of it.../With starry eyes and a thudding heart. ‘…to feel the rhapsodic moments…terrific write…thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [for beaut moment]

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