A Total Lie Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Total Lie

Rating: 5.0


He lied not to last long
He proved all the time wrong
He was not for us to remain among
He took it cheaply for song

He had wrong attitude
Did not realize what can be the magnitude?
He has to prefer now sultry solitude
He stands before us naked and nude

He may remain far and hide
The impact is great and wide
I would love to for get and forgive
Such things not to occur or to believe

He would attempt to lie
Desperate ways to try
Not to feel shy
Still asking why?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marina Gasbey 04 August 2010

I loved your rhyme in this, and it was a sad story indeed. Very well done, Thanks for sharing.... Marina Gasbey...

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Maulin Shah 26 July 2010

He lied not to last long He proved all the time wrong He was not for us to remain among He took it cheaply for song... unable to predict the friends....10

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Chand Shikari 13 July 2010

He lied not to last long He proved all the time wrong He was not for us to remain among... it is disgusting to note...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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