A Total Isolation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Total Isolation

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I feel lonely and think of total isolation
Something has struck to me as surprise revelation
I was shocked over last few days’ development
There was uneasy calm and slow movement

It was out come of some body’s desertion
It was denial of firm commitment or assertion
It was bothering me with concern and too much
I was unable to move freely as such

This loneliness in life is very dangerous stage
You may unable to maneuver or mange
Someone may loose heart from the beginning
Rest may remain calm and always grinning

You feel vacuum and no charm
It may cause great harm
The relation may not remain warm
You may prefer to go out of home and remain at farm

You may cry in wilderness but no one may hear
Pin and agony you alone may bear
There will be nobody to call you as dear
You may be weeping with lots of tears

You may love to be in secluded place
You will try to rub the memory and leave no trace
It is now known to everybody that you have fallen out of grace
You will be looked upon as defeated person who has lost the case

You are crest fallen person on ground
No sympathy is offered to you or found
You may make unsuccessful attempt or round
It is futile attempt and doesn’t look sound

It may take all your Peace and sleep
You may not be freely able to weep
You will be afraid of loosing the face
It has proved you very costly race

It may cause you irreparable damage
It is not less than murder or carnage
It is unbearable on your part to manage
It may send you back by many years in age


Survive the onslaught and come out with roar
You must be able to stand on the floor
There is no use staying in indoor
You have everything good in your store

You may suffer many set backs
You may be fired and sacked
There will still be more shocks
You still have to walk and keep always awake

Isolation is not be the only answer
You can count them on fingers as fewer
What is best solution or remedy?
It should not, result in tragedy or comedy

Come out clean and face the trauma
It may not end in good drama
You are the man to stand fast
It is the end chance last

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chand Shikari 29 July 2010

I feel lonely and think of total isolation Something has struck to me as surprise revelation I was shocked over last few days’ development There was uneasy calm and slow movement .. at one stage u may feel it and very lonel; ly....10

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Datdoggo 12 November 2018

Dw you will be ok Lysm 💕💔😆🙈

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Chand Shikari 13 July 2010

feel lonely and think of total isolation Something has struck to me as surprise revelation.. dangerous stage....10

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Chand Shikari 08 July 2010

I feel lonely and think of total isolation Something has struck to me as surprise revelation I was shocked over last few days’ development There was uneasy calm and slow movement.. it mis state of mind....10 not conducive....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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