Sunday, July 16, 2006

A Touch Of Heaven Comments

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Everything was peaceful with only the sound of the breeze
blowing softly through those tall pine trees
On the marsh, there was no flood like winter time
just puddles of water that had gone into decline
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sylvia spencer
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Duncan Wyllie 16 July 2006

WOW! I know of this feeling oh so well, a place where my brothers and I used to play called MONKTON FARLEIGH This piece is so, so, true: Gone are the days when we drove straight past because we were too much in a hurry, to make the splender last. Amazing, The hauntingly beautiful (A TOUCH OF HEAVEN) Love duncan X

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Scarlett Treat 16 July 2006

So many of our lovely places are disappearing that it is truly a joy to find the ones that are left, and use them, and treasure them because they ARE disappearing. And the added plus of having someone you love to share it with, and walk its paths with....how wonderful!

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Ernestine Northover 16 July 2006

You took us with you on this journey through nature Sylvia. Beautifully expressed. Lovely read and a pleasure to do so. Love Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 16 July 2006

This is a beautiful poem that simply shines with peace and contentment. Almost Heaven indeed! Love, Sandra

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