A Waiting Call By Nadood Poem by nadood al ND

A Waiting Call By Nadood



Ordered by everyone
Trying to run

No were to hide
No were that wide

A path unclear
A soul full of fear
Not knowing who is whispering in your ear
Hoping someone, somewhere is here

Closing your eyes thinking your that wise
When you finally start to rise
Thinking there is no reason for us to hide
When your looking at the unclear path
You know there is something to find

Stuck somewhere unknown
Looking at the phone
A ringing sound, a tone

No one, no one at all?
I feel like I fell the deepest fall
Looking at the unclear hall
Wishing someone to call
No, nothing at all

Trapped in a box
Surrounded with rocks
No breathe left
A phone next to your left

Waiting for a call
It is funny when you can't do so at all

When will that call come
From who will it be from

Waiting desperately
Waiting uncomfortably

Thinking no one will call
No one will know that at all

Eyes starting to close
Wishing to see another rose

Going in a deep, deep sleep
Nothing else to keep

Just waiting, and waiting, waiting
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Ring, ring, ring, ring
HELLO!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 17 July 2012

sounds and feels like a claustrophobic nightmare... very nicely expressed....conveys the effect very well indeed liked it cheers

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Unwritten Soul 21 February 2012

Aha finally there's a call for you...hope it's not a missed call or wrong number haahaha joking :) _It's a nice poem Nadood, the story of a waiting and we waiting the ending n the ending with a call that nice! _Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

It's so nice to read, a good poem!

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