A Waltz Wave: Loaf Of Bread Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

A Waltz Wave: Loaf Of Bread

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Loaf
of bread
makes
a song
of fragrance,
waiting
to
feed all
who hunger.
If only it
worked that way,
the world
could
be full
and hope would
waft on
winds
with bread
scent.

Tuesday, September 29, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kerry O'Connor 14 October 2009

Another excellent poem full of taste and texture.

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Lillian, I love it! It is wonderful to read a Waltz Wave where I have not had to count the syllables. The fragrance and the three alliterated words waft winds with make for a great Waltz Wave. And there is a message in there too for the world. Some of the convicts that came to Australia from England in the early 1800's had only stolen a loaf of bread so they wouldn't starve. Well done! 10 love Karin

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