A While Poem by Sarah Persson

A While

Rating: 5.0


I fought for just a glimpse,
Of a quiet space,
A while,
Where once I'd lived with daily,
Where now just noise,
Yes mainly.

Tuesday, November 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: peaceful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2017

The peaceful becomes noisy as per change of time and again noisy place comes down to calmness and this becomes peaceful. Fighting for a while for a glimpse of a quiet space is amazing but very interesting. This is an excellent poem beautifully narrated...10

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Sarah Persson 21 November 2017

Thank you as always Kumarmani, for your insightful comments

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Wellington, Shropshire
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