Sarah Louise Persson

Gold Star - 10,623 Points (14 October 1966 / Wellington, Shropshire)

Becoming One - Poem by Sarah Louise Persson

As you lay here beside me
I can see beyond your smile
Your heart, the normal charm you have
Is lost here for a while,

I touch your face
Trace your lips with my eyes
The dark handsome ruggedness
Fills my sighs,
Touch my lips to your forehead
To help ease the pain
Desire fills my entire
And it's hard to refrain,

But be it for one night
Or be it for days
I'll be here forever
To indulge in this haze,
Like the song of the humming bird
Our souls hold one tune
The rhythm lifts our spirits
Like the scent of fine perfume.

Trace thoughts through our touch
Through our touch, trace our thoughts
Becoming one in entirety
Feel the pulse of our warmth.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Becoming One by Sarah Louise Persson

  • Fabrizio Frosini (2/10/2017 10:09:00 AM)

    btw...
    oh.. I almost forgot.. your 'Becoming One' could be a good poem for the collection 'Our Chains, Our Dreams - Part 2.' - what do you think?
    Let me know
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    Sarah Persson Sarah Persson (2/10/2017 1:48:00 PM)

    This sounds good, thank you. Please email me with the info Fabrizio

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  • Fabrizio Frosini (2/10/2017 10:07:00 AM)

    Congratulations!
    well done, Sarah! I'm late.. but here I am.. ;) (Report) Reply

    Sarah Persson Sarah Persson (2/10/2017 1:46:00 PM)

    Thank you Fabrizio ;)

  • Robert Merrett (2/7/2017 12:06:00 AM)

    Connecting love
    A lovely poem displaying to me beautifully the bonding nature of love. Thank you Sarah (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (2/6/2017 11:34:00 PM)


    Know not why it feels me a relation between mother and child. And the expression quiet straight to expose the heart honestly at least for once in lifetime. Nice radiation indeed. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rajesh Thankappan (2/6/2017 10:08:00 PM)


    A charming poem on a loving unification that actually scripts this poem. Congratulation that this truly deserving poem has been selected as the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2017 9:20:00 PM)


    A most beautiful love poem, deservedly Poem Of The Day. Congratulations! I invite you to read some of my poetry, Sarah. (Report) Reply

  • Sylva-onyema Uba (2/6/2017 8:59:00 PM)


    Becoming one in entirety.

    Strong words on the essence of unity and love.
    Great poem!

    Sylva.
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  • (2/6/2017 4:21:00 PM)


    Congratulations, well deserved! ! ! emotins ten deep in this poem very gentle with a sweet passion. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/6/2017 2:42:00 PM)

    Congrats for the POTD
    Fantastic poem.... I quote some crafty lines....10++++
    I touch your face
    Trace your lips with my eyes
    The dark handsome ruggedness
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/6/2017 11:13:00 AM)

    Unity
    Smile, mile! With the muse of true love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Sarah Persson (2/6/2017 10:46:00 AM)

    Thank you all
    Thank you all for your encouraging comments. It's wonderful when others share in the joy of the poetry we create. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (2/6/2017 10:16:00 AM)

    Lovable
    This poem is really very lovable. Heart carries charming hopes to share love around us. Warmness of love sparks light of wisdom. This is very interesting sharing.10 (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (2/6/2017 9:54:00 AM)


    It's a dedication to immortal love. Congrats for being the member's PoD. hanks for sharing the wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (2/6/2017 9:44:00 AM)


    Such a beautiful and lovely poem. Each stanza gives a feeling of goodness and the heart spills love as river as the poem comes to an end. Thanks for sharing and congratulation. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2017 9:26:00 AM)


    Soft and tender expressions of moments of love and its effect. Being one in thoughts is a precious movement of soul getting united in love. Congratulations for member poem place. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2017 9:20:00 AM)


    A charming poem full of the pulse of love. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (2/6/2017 8:37:00 AM)


    Like the song of the humming bird
    Our souls hold one tune A love poem indeed!
    Thanks for sharing, Sarah!
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  • Christina Simmons (2/6/2017 7:51:00 AM)

    Becoming One:
    This poem makes me feel soft and sentimental and lovey-dovey. So touching and graceful.
    Congratulation for the day.
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  • Tom Allport (2/6/2017 2:57:00 AM)

    tom allport
    a very intimate poem full of love. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (2/6/2017 2:53:00 AM)


    Trace thoughts through our touch
    Through our touch, trace our thoughts
    Becoming one in entirety
    Feel the pulse of our warmth. - - - - A lovely romantic poem - - - - A feeling of love where thought and touch become one..
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2016



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