A Wish For Her Poem by Dr subhendu kar

A Wish For Her

Rating: 5.0


Let the night be in her extended arms
Across seem less darkness yet expanded
May hold her smooching in semblance
tearing apart all her sorrows besetting

and bedecking smiles rocking into her
when petals of soigne rose being dazzled by the moon
as the golden shadows of the dew refluxing
Falling from cloud upon love divine.

fidelity of facts tosses up in all acceptances
Who had her heart steeped in beauty embracing
Like a clock ticking on the wall uttering time
Yielding all glazes and glittering of a red rose protracing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 03 September 2007

Today happy to be here with a blooming feel, This poet flies in its 'peaks' when the petals of rose being dazzled by the moon the spell of images of love... Who had her heart steeped in beauty embracing Like a clock ticking on the wall uttering the time Falling from the cloud upon the love divine.

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Blue angel Florida 03 September 2007

Dramatically beautiful, thanks for sharing!

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Alison Cassidy 10 September 2007

Fulsome descriptions adorn this romantic piece with a lyrical heart. Most enjoyable. love, Allie xxxx

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Ewigi Liebe 10 September 2007

Beautiful expression romance and quality. thanks for sharing, With friendly regards, Mary

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beautiful..........really lovely.........loved the romance in it.....but my mind went racing thinking about the person for whom u made tht lil wish for? ? ? ? ? thnx for sharing love n peace dolly

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 January 2010

Imagery Bonanza Boom Bloom Boon 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Lady Grace 05 July 2009

this is really a poetic one..your wish for her is same as her wish for you...grace...

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Eithne Queen of Celts 15 April 2008

Simply adorable! I have felt myself in this poem.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 October 2007

PALLAVI MISHRA a truly romantic and awsome poetry.... a poem which describes love in the arms of darkness... a must read 4 all poetry lovers.

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Melvina Germain 07 October 2007

A truly beautiful and romantic piece, the word description is amazing. --Melvina--

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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