-a World Of Fantasy- Poem by Cryselle D'souza

-a World Of Fantasy-

Rating: 5.0


When the dark takes over the day,
And the world is all asleep,
The world of magic begins to leap.

A bright new star guides the way,
To show the fortunes of the day

When the wizards wave their wands
To change the bands of time-
And when the witches work out fortunes
On their crystal balls;

A WHOLE NEW WORLD
OF FANTASY IS BORN.

As the witches fly over with the brooms
Hoping to see their grooms.
And when the a wakeful dark
Calls out to the creatures of night-

A WHOLE NEW WORLD
OF FANTASY IS BORN.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 30 May 2009

wowwwwwwwwwww a fantasy land good write--

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Kesav Easwaran 30 May 2009

Real fantacy there, Cryselle...you have got a good imaginative mind...and poetic as well...good piece...i liked...10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 May 2009

The structure, the diction and the imagery are very well co-related in this poem. You have the art and craft, Cryselle. Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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R.k Das 28 May 2009

it is an enchanting fantasy, , nicely picturised.

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