I was happy to see my day,
However, things has been going on outside,
I try to do my best to survive in there
But, my best was my worst.
Before that day I wanted to be somebody
A professional cloth designer,
A professional singer,
Or a hip hop dancer.
Now I can’t even do it anymore,
Because, life has turned out badly
For me, my dad, my family,
And my beloved mom.
The person that I trust,
Loved, and who was my idol,
Took my life by killing me.
She left me died in her stomach.
I can tell the passion you put into your poetry. I believe in this poem and stand with you against abortion. this is a very creative and a good perception. good work and keep it up you can go far in life with poetry like this :)
Gloria, Once again I see some grammar and spelling errors, but a very nice poem. Go to my site and Read 'I want to Live'. The entire Congress of the United Sates owns a copy of my poem to help fight abortion. Keep up the good work. Lynn
A mature write.... it has sum gramatical mistakes but i still like it I agree with sara when she says sometimes its 'sadly' the best option....but disagree when she says its just an 'EGG'....she is completely wrong in saying that Anyways gud work....\m/
I completly disagree with this poem. Im sorry but which is more cruel? Letting a new born baby into a world where his/her parents are not wealthy and not in a secure relationship with a ba environment and maybe parents that are only teenagers? OR to let a Featus die NOT a baby, when you have an abortion you ar enot killing a baby its just an egg! so you have to know why alot of people in this real world take the option of abortion! Sometimes it is the best option.
I couldn't agree with you more. I wish everyone could read this and think the same way. Amazing poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very evil but true, sometimes it has to be done like stagatory rape, but not unless it haaas to be done its terrible i love this its imaginitive but, it needs more detail, or to be looked over your potential seems to be moe greater than this keep it up :)