About Time Poem by Max Reif

About Time

Rating: 5.0


Time, that relentless snail,
outpaces every cheetah,

crawls on toward the infinitely
receding finish line

and has no rival but he
who truly lives
in the Present,

for whom the very
idea of a race
has disappeared.

Thus, waiting for Spring Break,
I’m amazed at the infinitesimally slow
pace of the progression of moments,
and how they ever added
up to 58 years I’ll never know,

and also wondering,
if I were really ''Here, Now'',
would there be such
thing as waiting, at all?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 04 April 2006

The trick is to live in the moment. Easier said than done. We are usually so busy planning for the future, that the present goes unnoticed. And that's when we miss the beauty of just being. Great insight, and yes, how did we get this old already? ? ? ? Linda

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Martha Frost 31 March 2006

And is time our enemy or our friend? Good poem, Max! Skye

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Duncan Wyllie 31 March 2006

Perception of the moment can be a personal one I feel.This is so well written, a trait that we have come to admire in your work.My favourite part has to be: 'And has no rival but he who can truly live in the Present, for whom the very idea of a race has disappeared...This is amazing Max.God Bless you.Love Duncan

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***** ********* 31 March 2006

It is all in the mind Max! I enjoyed your exploration though. 10 from Tai with time to fly

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