Ache Poem by Kaitlyn Lancaster

Ache

Rating: 5.0


Your body aches,
Your brain aches.
You try to stretch out the pain,
Gently pulling your arms above your head.
All this does is tug further at the aching muscles in your neck and chest,
In turn making your brain ache more.
Your arms slump to your side,
Not wanting to move,
Not wanting to experience the pain again.
Someone looks at your slumped body and you instantly sit up,
Not wanting to be judged or questioned.
You grimace as you realise just how much your body aches,
Just how much your brain aches.

Sunday, November 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mental illness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 29 November 2018

Fine poem by you..........

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Kaitlyn Lancaster 29 November 2018

Thank you for the comment.

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Chinedu Dike 26 November 2018

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Kaitlyn Lancaster 29 November 2018

Thank you for the feedback.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Kaitlyn. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kaitlyn Lancaster 29 November 2018

Thank you. i have had a look at your poem and it looked really good.

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