Sunday, November 25, 2018

Ache Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your body aches,
Your brain aches.
You try to stretch out the pain,
Gently pulling your arms above your head.
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Kaitlyn Lancaster
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Prabir Gayen 29 November 2018

Fine poem by you..........

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Kaitlyn Lancaster 29 November 2018

Thank you for the comment.

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Chinedu Dike 26 November 2018

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Kaitlyn Lancaster 29 November 2018

Thank you for the feedback.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Kaitlyn. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kaitlyn Lancaster 29 November 2018

Thank you. i have had a look at your poem and it looked really good.

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