Across The Veil Comments

This is a very busy poem, many observations that have to be reached, related to the thread of thought. Not easy thing to do and yet these readers love it so very well done for that.

wonderful as always, i truely enjoy it...............

Discord and harmony play cat and mouse in this evocative poem that uses metaphor like the painter uses color. Majestic landscapes, insignificant small creatures and the timeless issues of right and wrong coalesce in this finely sculptured poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

You are a superb word painter. I can hear that bell that tolls the end of the day. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

A powerful write Dr. Kar! Wonderfully expressed as always! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

Time changes, rose fades off by the curtain.......... Yet the bell tolls – it is end of the day Death is the mother of all beauty..........Impatient time follows and breaks the thread and make us free forever...the expression is deep and moving..