Acrostic Of Your Name #1 Poem by Doris Cornago

Acrostic Of Your Name #1

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Kidding me, you taunt me, threateningly
To pull my hair, and running around
Shouting, giggling, with me in
Dismay, wouldn't mind
Really to give in
To your
Boyish
Silly taunts
But yes, there's
A quietness which fills
The gaps too much that
Being silly may just be the only
Recovery from all the silence which
Clutters your mind, escape from its bind

Acrostic Of Your Name #1
Friday, July 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday,birthday greetings,greetings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This man whom I met at some point in my adult life overwhelmed me with his fresh look at life, his honesty and childlike curiosity. It's not exactly love at first sight but more of finding someone who reflected the child in you. The feeling is one of fascination.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 21 July 2017

We think of ourselves in terms of others, and tie up our circumstances with theirs. War and peace, two opposite terms but who profits from both, the need for one justifies the other. I only need a patch of land where I can love freely and be loved and spend my days, not bellyaching, but admiring as the moon dips low into the sea. We only have one life to live and wasted enough of it chasing after -isms and being kicked in the shin.

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Doris Cornago 21 July 2017

Most people think there' s a clash when young and old meet but such is not the case here. The young happens to be much older in perspective and the old is having a second childhood, as it were. A happenstance.

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Doris Cornago 21 July 2017

Knowing a man is being with him through his highs and lows and just listening when he needs to unburden. The silly phases are deceptive, not because he likes to deceive, but because lightheartedness is a way of letting things fly, be less in control, be more of the observer, not the one being observed.

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Doris Cornago 21 July 2017

They say that you meet yourself somewhere along the way but the wonder is this someone is the exact opposite of who you think you are. And not of the same gender, too. Serendipity!

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