she
stolen from my bone
is it any wonder
i hunger to tunnel back
inside desperate
to reconnect the rib and clay
and to be whole again
some need is in me
struggling to roar through my
mouth into a name
this creation is so fierce
i would rather have been born
This poem captures exactly how any human created by adam would feel. Although that is true, this insults how Gdd created humanity and implies that adam disagreed with him. But every1 has a say, an opinion, and a way of putting them into words. So i give you a thumbs up, not a thumbs down.
" i hunger to tunnel back inside desperate to reconnect the rib and clay and to be whole again" . A real hunger for the lost perfection!
Adam and Eve! ! Muse of creating man and woman. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
some need is in me struggling to roar through my mouth into a name this creation is so fierce i would rather have been born.. very good poem. tony
... this creation is so fierce i would rather have been born./// wonderfully written on human creation
What a creative and fascinating piece of poetry. This will surely get a +++10
this so nice ilike it