Addicted Poem by Leonard Dabydeen

Addicted

Rating: 5.0


This cool morning breeze

keeps my heart beating with joy:

I smell your perfume.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bert Bell 06 November 2010

You're so good at writing these powerful laconic poems. Splendid work.10

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Siddharth Singh 29 March 2010

A beautiful and mystic write.

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Indira Babbellapati 23 March 2010

caressing comfort in the cool morning breeze like an infant's touch

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Pradyumna Jyotir 19 March 2010

Sir....a young friend of mine said that there should be an element of mystery in every creation......and today I cannot agree with him more.....What is this perfume? Is it the perfume of the cool morning breeze...or the perfume of someone you know.....No I don't want to know the answer....I prefer basking in the mystery.......and the cool morning breeze.

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