Sydney Daniels

Rookie (12/02/1974 / Wisconsin)

Addiction - Poem by Sydney Daniels

The wanting is restless
Toes tapping, fingers rapping
Against the hard table surface.

The need stands
Body pacing, arms waving
Driving away the addiction.

The desire pours
Every pore, every breath
Expelling its sweetness.

The craving remains
Lurking inside, behind the mind
Willpower pushing it back.


Comments about Addiction by Sydney Daniels

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/5/2008 8:24:00 PM)


    i craze for more.....from u.... (Report) Reply

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  • (4/4/2006 7:49:00 PM)


    Nice imagery and flow (Report) Reply

  • (3/26/2006 12:01:00 PM)


    Excellent piece! I especially like the terse, staccato tone you have used here. It adds to the great imagery.
    Blessings-TGR (Theresa)
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  • (3/23/2006 10:12:00 PM)


    Yes, how I do recall. Nice job Syd you placed it all in a few little lines!


    Patricia
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  • (3/23/2006 9:55:00 PM)


    hmm strong words fighting to hold back its very nice keep up your work and i'll have to do the same very nice piece though heh yeah go go go (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2006 8:29:00 PM)


    Addiction to desire? Very powerful,

    best

    Gershon
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 23, 2006



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